Today, we will work on the blogs only until 9:10. Then we will watch Amazing Grace.
Here is the blog assignment that you will have 20 minutes to complete (do a good job, but do it quickly!):
Read the “Love All People” stories of the THREE (3) people to your RIGHT. On each person’s post, write one (or more) constructive criticism(s) and one (or more) comment(s) of praise. When you are finished, read the reviews on your post, and if you see an opportunity to make changes, do so.
Here is an example of a POOR review:
I thought your story was really good. It also had some things that you could change. You could write more.
Here is an example of a STELLAR review:
Your story was very detailed; I particularly liked the dialog that you included because it made the story come alive. You also had great word choice when you said, “the bully lumbered through the halls eyeing which innocents to pummel.” You might want to edit for tense because you jumped from past tense to present tense some. Also, you could add to the ending to clarify how the “unlovable person” really changes in the end.
